Title: Supervillain: The Concise Guide

Author: Ras Ashcroft

Publisher: Independent

Pages: 90

Lending: Enabled

 

If you’re interested in Supervillains, this might be a book for you. Written in a non-fiction style, this satire is an interesting methodology on how to go from rags to riches… as a villain.

Ashcroft admits, right at the opening, that this is a parody of self-help guides on Finance. It fits this category, making very obvious jabs at how-to guides and self-help books.

In general, the book was well written, handling the line between fiction, non-fiction, and satire with adept ease. While some reviewers found this book hilarious, I found it to be subtle. Almost too subtle. The first 40 pages or so I found genuinely interesting, particularly in terms of the creativity in which Ashcroft builds a fictional supervillain empire. After that, however, it delves deeper into the expected cliches and rehashes what most people already know about being the ideal evil overlord.

In short, it went to the far-fetched and unbelievable at around the same time the book looks toward space as a viable method of taking over Earth.

The approach for this book I cannot fault. It does a good job of mocking many of the self-help books (on finance) that I’ve browsed out of curiosity. However, I do think that it stayed a little too much on the side of safety, using practical methods to become a villain without delving too dangerously into ‘evil’, such as it were. (The obvious fantasy of domination towards the end of the book excluded.)

To boil this book down a bit, ‘Common Sense Prevails’ is the golden rule. If it breaks the law, avoid it or cover your tracks and work in cash only.

I’d talk about characters and themes, but this book doesn’t really have anything of that sort. It is a down-to-earth guide on a method to become a supervillain. Would it work? Honestly, I don’t think so. I wish this book had more hard humor, cracks at heroes and villains, and otherwise not take itself too seriously. While it is obviously satire, I don’t think it was edgy enough or funny enough. It was just too close of a parody without that edge that I normally love in parodies.

There wasn’t nearly enough of the sharks with lasers, acid pits, spike traps, and maintaining a fortress of doom that I was really, really hoping for. Even if it was a step-by-step guide on why not to do these things as a viable supervillain. Ashcroft covered a little bit of it, but not nearly enough to satisfy my thirst for that sort of thing.

Yes, I was disappointed in the fact that there wasn’t a single guide on building a doomsday device of awesomeness or a torture mechanism just for superheroes. The solutions Ashcroft presented were just too based on reality and too reasonable.

I’m being completely unreasonable about this point, but being an evil overlord or super villain should be fun.

That said, I think it is worth the amusement value at the price of $0.99, especially if you’re into that sort of thing. Just don’t go in expecting to get stitches in your side from laughing. I did laugh a little a few times, but I was a little disappointed that I wasn’t as amused as I was hoping to be based off of the general description of the book, which poses a lot of ‘Would you like…’ questions that left me hopeful there’d be humor in the guide itself.

That said, for the price, it isn’t a bad read. It is pretty close to what I’d consider professionally publishable quality, which puts it above a great many of the independent books I’ve been exposed to. That said, I wouldn’t pay more than $0.99 for this book, as I think it does need more edgy humor to it and a harder edge to fit the them. I certainly wouldn’t purchase it if I was in a book store based off of the cover alone, which didn’t appeal to me at all.

If I had to give this book a star rating out of 5*, I’d give it a solid 3*. There were good points about it, and I didn’t feel like I wasted the 2 hours or so it took me to read through the book.

 

Originally Posted on December 6, 2011.
Book cover - David Summers - Owl DanceBook Title: Owl Dance
Author: David Lee Summers
Paperback: 270 pages
Publisher: Flying Pen Press LLC
Release Date: September 14, 2011
Language: English
ISBN-10: 0979588936
ISBN-13: 978-0979588938

When I first heard about Owl Dance by David Lee Summers, I was intrigued by the concept of the novel. When given the chance to read it, I jumped at the opportunity. While the book wasn’t quite what I was expecting, I wasn’t disappointed. I have a history of being worried about titles that aren’t backed by major publishing houses. Flying Pen Press is a small, but the quality of this book did not seem harmed by that fact.

It didn’t take long to determine that this book would be an interesting read. The story opens with the meeting of Ramon Morales and Fatemeh. Morales is a Sheriff in a town named Socorro in New Mexico. This intrepid pair starts off in what looks to be a normal, western setting. A chain of unfortunate events and a witch trial put these two characters on the run.

Summers takes the opportunity to show us a bit of this alternate western United States through the eyes of these two characters as they travel across the states.

It doesn’t take long for the science fiction and steampunk elements to be revealed. However, if you’re looking for hard science fiction, look away now. This definitely falls as more of a steampunk, where the imagination is left to explain most of the sciences in the book. You won’t find many references to science at all in the opening of the book. Once it shows up, however, it adds a lot of interesting layers to this novel.

From pirates in submarines to robot wolves, Owl Dance provides as varied a cast of characters as any science fiction fan could desire. Aliens and Russians play into the mix, adding a level of complexity that many science fiction fans should enjoy.

I think this book will be enjoyed by those who enjoy moderate science fiction. It has the drier style I associate with harder science fiction, but the sciences presented are easy to handle without any second thoughts on it. The steampunk and science elements are secondary to story and character, but still play a significant role in the overall book.

Plot: 3.5 out of 5 *

The plot starts out as a strong western, but as more characters are introduced and the story takes a more steampunk turn, there are scenes that feel a little disjointed in the general flow of the book. This is made up by far by the interesting characters and general intrigue of the book.

Characters: 4 out of 5 *

The strongest part of this book are the characters. The romance between Fatemeh and Ramon is blatantly obvious but enjoyable nevertheless. In Gorloff and Legion, there is intrigue rampant that can change the world. The supporting characters, however, often seem flat as they often rely on stereotypes to come to life.

The Sciences: 3.5 out of 5 *

If I had to pick a flaw for this book, the lower science levels would be it. There is barely enough to satisfy the science fiction fan within me, especially earlier in the novel.

Note: The heart of my complaint isn’t the quality of the sciences. It is the quantity. The score reflects this.

Overall: 4 out of 5 *

David Lee Summers’ writing style is matched well to western steampunk. his narrative allows for a strong story, a smooth flow of action, and sensible, realistic characters. There are times where the book feels a little slow and that there was a lessening of tension where I felt that it could have been sustained for longer. Despite this, it was an enjoyable read.

Suggested Reading: I would recommend this book for adult audiences. While this book is suitable for teenagers, I don’t feel that this would be able to hold their attention unless they are serious steampunk or western fans.

 

Originally posted on December 6, 2011.

Greetings!

In case you haven’t noticed, there has been a lot of interviews lately. I’m pleased to say that this isn’t the end of them. If you’re an author, agent, editor, or someone with know-how about the publishing world, and  you’d like to be a victim of one of these interviews, please feel free to give a shout out. You can send me a tweet (@rebeccablain) or find me on google+.

Now, for the interview. Today, I am pleased to introduce to you David Summers. David has written several books, edited a magazine for 17 years, and has also done editing work for anthologies.

Greetings, David!

Thank you for taking the time out of your busy schedule to answer these questions. Congratulations on your recently release of your book. Can you tell us a little about your book and the journey you took to get it from conception to print?

My latest novel is called OWL DANCE and it’s a wild west steampunk adventure. It tells the story of a healer from Persia named Fatemeh Karimi who tries to make a life for herself in the Southwest, but rapidly gets in trouble with one of the local mine owners. A sheriff named Ramon Morales helps her out and they both end up on the road, falling into one adventure after another. They meet mad scientists, pirates and ultimately they have to stop an invasion of the United States by Russian airships.

You can read a bit more about the novel at the publisher’s website.

The novel started out as a short story called “The Persian Witch” which ran in the anthology TRAILS: INTRIGUING STORIES OF THE WILD WEST which was published in 2006. In 2007, I wrote two more stories featuring Ramon and Fatemeh. During the course of those stories, Ramon and Fatemeh’s world took on more of a Wild West steampunk look. Then in 2009, David Rozansky of Flying Pen Press asked if I had a steampunk novel that I could pitch to him. I sent him the stories plus an outline that showed the story arc I had in mind. He gave me the green light and I proceeded to write the novel. He purchased it at the beginning of 2011.

This isn’t your first time working with Flying Pen Press. What made you choose this specific press for your books versus trying for a different press?

I edited two of the FULL-THROTTLE SPACE TALES anthologies for Flying Pen Press: SPACE PIRATES and SPACE HORRORS. I enjoyed working with David Rozansky on those collections and I liked the quality of the books themselves. Moreover, I’ve seen those books distributed in more bookstores than any of my other titles.

Of course, David Rozansky sparked OWL DANCE by asking for an outline, so as far as I was concerned, he had first right of refusal for the finished novel. Also, I knew he had hired a good editor, knowledgeable about the steampunk genre. All of those facts together prompted me to stick with Flying Pen through the whole publication process.

What process did you use to select your publisher? Can you tell us anything about the pitfalls and challenges that you encountered on your way to getting your books in print?

At the point that I wrote OWL DANCE, I had two established publishing companies that I had a really good working relationship with — one of them being Flying Pen Press. I like both companies about equally, but OWL DANCE was something quite different from what the other publisher had done. In particular, because David Rozansky had hired Matt Delman to edit steampunk titles, I thought Flying Pen had a particular passion for this up-and-coming genre that my other publisher didn’t necessarily share.

Because I already had two established publishers, I actually had a relatively easy time bringing OWL DANCE to print.

Earlier in my career, it was a different story. I had an agent who sold my novel THE PIRATES OF SUFIRO to a publisher in Canada. That publisher promptly went out of business and I had a book few people were interested in. I’ll tell a little more of that story in the next question, but in short I tried to resell the book and its sequel CHILDREN OF THE OLD STARS without much success. Finally, a friend of mine was hired as an art director for LBF Books. He encouraged me to submit the books there. They loved them and asked if I could complete the trilogy, which I did. The books have been in print with them ever since. LBF also went on to publish my novel VAMPIRES OF THE SCARLET ORDER.

Do you have an agent? If you do, what steps did you take to acquire him or her? If not, what made you choose not having an agent?

As I mentioned in the previous question, I had an agent. I was living in Tucson at the time, and this particular agent was scheduled to come to a local book festival. She was taking submissions of manuscripts to evaluate, so I sent THE PIRATES OF SUFIRO to her. In the meantime, I researched her and she appeared legitimate with a listing in Literary Market Place and a good client list. I was thrilled when she agreed to represent THE PIRATES OF SUFIRO.

Unfortunately, what I didn’t know was that she was involved in a scam to send authors to a vanity press. She ultimately went to jail for that scam and that ended my relationship with her.

I haven’t worked to find an agent since then. That said, I know that having a good agent can be helpful and can really help on the business side of publishing. So I’ve been giving serious thought to beginning the search again.

Steampunk wouldn’t be steampunk without the science. During your ‘daily’ life, you operate telescopes at Kitt Peak National Observatory. When you aren’t tinkering, you enjoy history and travel. What triggered the jump from doing things like this in the real world to putting them on paper as stories?

In some ways the jump actually happened the other way around. I’ve been writing stories as long as I can remember. Sometime when I was about eight years old, I declared to my parents that I was going to be a writer. They told me I couldn’t do that, no one ever made money as a writer. So they encouraged me to find something I could make money at. Because I liked space exploration from all the science fiction I read as a kid, I thought astronomy would be a good career, and it succeeded in pleasing my parents.

Now I should step back and say, no one can have a good career in science if they don’t have a passion for the subject. That passion for me developed starting when I was eight and has continued to grow since then. The work we do at Kitt Peak nowadays, looking for exoplanets and trying to understand dark matter and dark energy is vitally important and I’m really honored to be a part of it.

That said, writing is like having a good diet for me. I just don’t feel right if I go a week without putting some words into the computer!

You are one of the many who merge writer and editor in one entity. Did you start as an editor or did you start as a writer? What made you pursue both aspects of writing?

My science career is actually where I got my start in editing. My science papers were heavily hacked up and put back together again by peers. It gave me a strong appreciation for clarity in writing. As I started seriously pursuing writing for publication and being part of writer’s groups, I realized I could bring those skills to my fellow writers.

A short time after that, my wife pursued her MBA at the University of Arizona. She did research into small press publishing and we decided to start a small press called Hadrosaur Productions where I could use those editorial skills I’d been acquiring. The press was originally going to focus on audio books, but it really got off the ground with a small magazine called HADROSAUR TALES. Over the years, we’ve changed the format and its now called TALES OF THE TALISMAN.

Can you tell us a little about your editing work?

Most of the editing I do now is selecting and editing stories for TALES OF THE TALISMAN magazine. We have two reading periods each year starting on January 1 and July 1. We read until the magazine is full — usually about six weeks after opening. People can learn more about the magazine, order a sample copy and get writer’s guidelines at talesofthetalisman.com

Editing a magazine for 17 years has given me a really critical eye for stories. I have a good sense for what things work and don’t work in a story. I’ve learned that if you mention something in a story, you should pay it off in some way before the story ends. I’ve also developed a pretty good eye for things that have been done to death, versus ideas that could use further exploration. I use all of that both when selecting stories for the magazine as well as when writing my own stories and novels.

As I mentioned earlier, I’ve also edited two anthologies for Flying Pen Press called SPACE PIRATES and SPACE HORRORS. Those were invitation anthologies, where I invited a set of writers I knew and had worked with to submit. I picked the writers because I knew they were solid storytellers and would bring a good balance to the anthologies.

Every writer approaches a book differently. Do you have a set method for writing a novel? If so, do you mind sharing your process? What makes you tick as a writer?

I usually start a novel with a handful of cool ideas — or at least ideas I think are cool. I start a file on the computer and put those ideas down, then let them percolate for a while until I understand the story that links those ideas together. At that point, I typically put together a synopsis that gives me an idea of what the novel is actually about. That’s about the time I’m ready to start composing the novel.

At that point, I approach chapters the same way I approach short stories. In both cases, I start thinking about the events and go through a process of visualization. I try to “see” the events of the story as though they are something that actually happened. Once I think I have the story sorted out, I’m finally ready to sit down and write it. By the time I get to that stage, I feel like I’m writing about something that actually happened. I take a lot of long walks and a lot of this visualizing happens while I’m out walking.

Do you ever find that your editorial side interferes with your creative side?

Not too much. I do find that I tend to edit as I type, trying to make things get better even as I’m writing them. However, that’s where the long walks come in. I get the basics of the story down in my mind before I actually try to set them down in the computer. It becomes a way for me to keep the editor in me from interfering with story creation before I’m ready to write the words. Once I’m ready to write the words, the editor helps to make sure I get the right ones down the first time — or at least close to the right ones!

Writing is a never-ending process. Do you have any new projects that are in the works right now? Can you tell us a little about what you’re actively working on?

Right now I’m putting the finishing touches on a novel called DRAGON’S FALL. It’s a prequel to VAMPIRES OF THE SCARLET ORDER that’s slated to be out in early 2012. The book is basically complete and edited, but I’m working on some extra scenes my editor and I thought would enhance the novel.

Next after that, I plan to start work on a sequel to OWL DANCE tentatively entitled CLOCKWORK POSSE. I’ve already started collecting ideas and throwing them into a file on my computer!

What is your favorite part of writing?

I think my favorite part is when I realize that I have a story that actually works. That usually happens somewhere between the visualization step and the actual writing stage. Basically it’s the moment in writing where I realize that I know this story and I don’t have to work at it. I’m just along for an enjoyable ride!

If you could give a new writer one piece of advice, what would it be?

Always hone and practice your craft. Part of that is to read with a thoughtful eye — see what other writers do better than you and see if you can incorporate something of that into your own writing. Part of that is to write regularly and look at your own writing with a critical eye. Ask yourself if you told a story in the best possible way. Have readers give you feedback and pay attention. Readers and editors aren’t always right, but they always provide insight.

No interview is complete without a strange question. You can take one famous author to lunch with you. During the hour you have with them, you are not allowed to talk about the writing craft or about books in any shape or form. Who would you take with you and what would you talk about?

I think it would have to be Neil Gaiman and I would talk to him about the places he’s been. It sounds like he’s traveled quite a bit around the United States and so have I. It would be fun to talk about some of the things we’ve seen and people we’ve encountered. Of course, maybe that’s cheating since that’s the essence of what good storytelling is all about!

Thank you for joining us!

Thanks for the interview! It was a pleasure. Please feel free to let me know if you have any followup questions.

 

Originally posted on March 18, 2011.

Interviews with writers have always fascinated me. I enjoy reading interviews almost more than I enjoy reading blogs. Almost, but not quite.

Today, it is with great pleasure that I introduce you to Berit Ellingsen. Berit has dived into the world of self-publication. Her book, The Empty City, will debut this spring.

In the busy days ahead of her publication date, Berit has taken the time to answer a few questions for me. Below, you will find the interview in its entirety:

Hi Berit!

It is very interesting how global tragedy can bring people together. I first met you as a result of the earthquake that devastated Japan. The scope of this disaster is often hard to understand. Many of us are struggling to cope at just how much can be destroyed within a matter of minutes

Yet, in all of the confusion and mayhem, you made the time to join the Authors for Japan project. What can you tell us about Authors for Japan?

Authors for Japan is a charity auction with more than 150 items donated by authors from all genres. Among the prizes are signed books, chapter or short story critique, book swag, membership in writing circles, being written in as a character in a story or let the winner choose a character’s name, even a meeting with a literary agent.

Check the auctions out here:

The auction proceeds will go to the Red Cross UK, the winners will receive instructions how to donate their bid.

Authors for Japan was organized by Keris Stainton and friends. They did an amazing job in getting the website up and running just 48 hours after Keris made the first call for participants on her blog and on Twitter.

I think everyone who watched the devastation in Japan after the tsunami and the following problems with the nuclear reactors, all the people that were evacuated, and the concern of the people of Tokyo, felt that they wanted to do something to help.

When you put your book and critique up for auction on Authors for Japan, what were you expecting?

Some of the authors donating to the auction have large followings and most of them write in genres like romance and chick lit. I wasn’t sure whether anyone would bid for a literary fiction book and critique, so I’m very happy to see that all three of my auctions have received bids.

Your Book, The Empty City, will debut in Spring 2011. How long did it take for you to write this book? Can you tell us a little of your writing process and the things that you had to endure to make this book a reality?

The first draft for The Empty City took about 4 months to write. Then there’s been 8 months of revisions and edits, from global to line edits.

The final version is very different from the first draft, which was much longer. I really didn’t know what it should look like or what style it should be in or what market it should be aimed at. I wrote the first draft and then learned a lot during editing.

I got feedback from a few beta readers and a lot of help from my line editor, Toni Rakestraw, who’s a professional editor. She’s great to work with and I recommend her warmly.

During the final rounds of edits, I took up again short story writing and reading and that really changed and improved my writing overall. It changed the book a lot.

What inspired you to become a writer?

I started out as a non-fiction writer in science journalism. I wrote a novel and submitted some short stories a couple of years ago, and then took it up again now.

I have had a longer time as reader than as a writer, but have dabbled in it since childhood. I tried to avoid writing The Empty City for about two years, but then I couldn’t resist it anymore.

There are so many options for publication. You can self-publish or go through traditional venues. What did you pick and why?

For The Empty City I will self publish. The book is about contemplation, self awareness and becoming comfortable with silence. I may be wrong, but I don’t think many agents or publishers would take a chance on fiction about that in today’s tight publishing market.

I would have liked to work with a small press, but doing that requires that the author does a lot of marketing herself. I thought I could just as well publish it myself and do the marketing, since I’m used to working freelance already.

What is your favorite aspect of self-publication?

That I can choose my own editor, beta readers and cover designer. That’s a luxury, I believe, but also demands stringency and professionalism.

For me indie doesn’t meant not having to use an editor or not having to revise a lot. I’ve probably edited and revised as much as I would have done with a publisher, and it’s maybe taken just as long time.

Your most disliked aspect?

That there are less people to bounce ideas off and discuss questions and approaches with. It’s probably much more of a solo flight than working with an agent or a publisher, although I hear that can be lonely too, if things go badly.

It’s the dilemma of the freelancer, you have a lot of freedom but that freedom can be difficult or counter-productive at times. But since I have worked as a freelancer for a few years, I felt I had some useful experience with it.

If you could give one piece of advice to someone who is considering self-publication, what would it be?

Only do it if you really don’t want to go traditional. It’s probably not less work or that much faster than traditional, only different. Always use a professional editor and cover designer.

It is a long journey from deciding that you want to be a writer to actually publishing your book. What were the most difficult challenges that you had to endure as a writer?

When I took up again writing for The Empty City, after a few years of absence from fiction, my writing was unrefined. After the first drafts I participated in NaNoWriMo 2010, started writing short stories again and reading various literary magazines online. I learned a lot and I think it made my writing better. At least it got more accurate and specific. But it also meant a huge amount of edits for The Empty City. I’m a constant reviser and always find something I want to change.

If you could have changed anything about how you learned how to write, what would it be?

I would have angsted less over trying to fit into a genre and trying to write like the mainstream, and I would have read less writing tips that turned out to be not very useful for me. I learned a lot more about writing from reading literary fiction, and things that I liked and had to stretch for a little to understand.

I have a fondness for asking weird questions at the end of an interview. If you had to be a character of a novel, which character would you want to be and why?

That’s a really fun question! I have loved all of your questions so far.

A few months ago I read an extremely well researched Science Fiction book named Blindsight by SF author and marine biologist Peter Watts. It’s about first contact with an alien species, it’s very hard and scientific SF. Watts has so many great ideas about how an alien species would be, most of them based on biological principles. It was really fun to read, since my background is in biology too.

For his meeting with weird aliens, Watts needed an equally weird crew of humans. They are all genetically or biologically altered but that doesn’t mean they are perfect. They are all quite dysfunctional.

The captain and protagonist of the crew is Watts’ version of vampires, genetically recreated from ancient parts of human DNA. Watts describes the vampire so well and why he’s the right (and wrong) person to face the aliens, that he would be my fictional character of choice. I would have liked to be Peter Watts’ edgy vampire Jukka Sarasti that has a dangerous and chaotic run-in with aliens in space, together with a bunch of weird and dysfunctional scientists. (Smiles)

Thanks a lot for the questions.

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